Thursday, May 10, 2012

Fight - 55 word story


She fought love as always. Love was not something you gave yourself to. It cut your soul. It made you forget who you really are. All it did was give you pain. Make you its slave. She deleted his number. Cut-off with all contacts. Left the city.

Lust would rule her life better. Fight over.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

contd.. He realized late but she had been long gone. He did not had much choice with lust yet he chose Love for he knew it would come wrapped in pain. For him the fight just began with the greatest defeat already...as he knew he 'LOST' everything worth fighting for

messys musings said...

Good one. My question : What went wrong with them?

Anonymous said...

nothing much... just that both were too focused on being right.
but in relationship you are not right or wrong, you are just you and he is just him.
Nothing has to be wrong to make things go wrong. Sometimes being right at the wrong moment makes thing worse.