i could read it in your eyes
the roses that you got me
told me everything you craved
the moment your hand held me
i felt the fire burning
the moment your lips kissed me
i felt myself drowning
there was lust all around us
your eyes asking, my eyes wanting
your hands in my hair
and then on my nape
your lips on my eyes
and then on my lips
the lust still spiraling
the passion still seeking
a want, a desire
better left untold
and then u were gone
away far away
a hole in my soul
lusting evermore
did you know that APHRODITE PORNE is the goddess lust??? ... Greek Mythology... now u know the origin of the word 'pornography' ;))
22 comments:
RE:Porne - wow I learnt something new 2day thanks to ya eyezzz!
Lust I believe is essential in life just like anything else, but one has to keep paying heavily for it...
Keshi.
musing! nice poem...but you still deviated...i mean the poem. It took a funny climax instead of being more sensual!
i am the judge, the jury and the unholy trinity! :) hope u can excuse me for being a bad critic.
.rahul_
hey kesh thanx again for reading the crap i write..lol
anonymous u r most welcome..by the way i m not a poet or a writer..i just write what i want to..its more for my satisfaction..but then any sort of comments are welcome..mayb i'll write something better next...
u can call me rahul if u want to! btw who said what you wrote is crap! did i ...lol
hey rahul..i never said that to u..that was for keshi...about the goddess porne thing...lol...
hehe not crap at all...very interesting n u r quite wise for ur age eyezz, which is hotter than anything else!
Keshi.
looks like high time some one modified that archaic list....
Incidently, have you watched the movie "Seven Sins"? It's quite ghastly.
Didn't know aphrodite had to do anything with porn. But then I never really thought about the origins of the term pornography :P
lust..i won't see it as an emotion thats negative.It's just been linked with sexual lust and which in a way is bad.But lust for things like...umm..life.
lol keshi..by the way what do u think is my age??? ;)
hmm aeolus.. lets modify them ourselves...but only when i m through with these ones.. i cant think of anything else to write as of now...lol
hey pravin never thought of the origin myself..i got a friend who just gives me such interesting information... n naah havent seen the movie..n since u say its ghastly.. i never will...by the way thanx for visiting...
yeah ashes rite..but as u say the moment u hear the word lust it gives the impression of sex...
I think I agree with something someone went before me and said. This piece of prose / poetry has power in it, power in the questions that werent answered. Power in how the reader recognises the lostness of the moment. Power in your unwillingness to display emotions, just physical manifestations of a feeling you desperately hope is real. Thats why the climax (no pun) confused me.
hello nick thanx for visiting... i guess u r rite...mayb wanted to get away from the feelings...
Hopped on your space via Ashes. Liked your insights.
But feeling is writing, and vice versa, whether its emotional or physical, its always feeling. Can anyone help me, looking for a project and thinking about a grand scale hugely over the top Poetic Novella of some sort. Thinking of basing it on my post entitled "Every fret of my guitar is marked with a bruise from my life with it. I hope some day I'll remember them all. " 3rd post down. Can anyone show me some other hugely long modern poems? Or an opinion on the post, where to go, something? Let me feed from your power!!!!!!! Thanks.
LUST ROCKS!!
hey dewdy n acri thanx for visiting...
lol nv i think lust rocks too...
LUST for life is that a Deadly sin i guess most of the mortals will hey stop right there get ur bearnings right.
So if lust for life is ok why is lust for FOOD not ok,
So if lust for food is ok why is LUST for mating NOT ok, U guys know what the problem is
well this
We wanna do this and we wanna do that but we never wanna come out of the closet, we live in a democracy but are never free, we are always binded by silly rules from religion from society from parents from freinds from companions whatever.
I feel hungry i eat i feel hungry i eat so guys happy lusting and happy eating
Be urself and not what others want you to be.
Life could be a merry go around which simply goes round n round OR it could be a roller coaster with its ups and downs choose select but whatever be urself be you.
SO if u selection is the roller coaster u know who to contact the blancspace NO CC required.
lol anonymous... i knew ud say this... u've been telling me this since i have known u... will tell u if i want the roller coaster promise... n yeah no CC reqd... ;)...lol
the eyes can do what our physical beings cant.
yet eyes dont sin
i m shocked wid this one.. but well!
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